The frozen man was a tale I grew up with my grandpa mike told it to me almost every night when I
Was a little girl. My grand pa mike is a very nice and goofy person with an big creativity. He has
Always lived with us for as long as I can remember. After my grandma died he has not been the same tho he always mopes at night wen he thinks I’m asleep but I’m not I always peek my head around the door and cry with him because I miss my grandma so much I feel for him a lot . Part one
Oh, that is so sad. What a beautiful little girl to have so much feeling for her grandfather. Your story is a very creative response to the challenge. One thing to be careful about is to use a capital letter for proper nouns; Mike. Well done.