Chloe and I where at the park walking. When we heard a loud scream coming
From the old statue we ran. Suddenly we saw a old man and we raced up to him to
Ask him if he heard the scream. He said yes then we asked if he knew why it was
Coming out of the statue? He said that legend Has it the statue was cursed
By an evil witch. We gasped suddenly the Chloe disappeared me and the old
Man searched for hours and hours but we could not find her. So i told her parents
She has not been found since.
Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Molly. Your layout was interesting, and suggested poetry. You made good word choices, like raced, and gasped, which enhanced your writing. I found your text engaging. Well done! 😊